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ZealUK
04-03-2008, 09:30 AM
Can someone make this into a snappy catchphrase?

気迫は技術に勝る

"A strong spirit defeats skill" isn't very catchy you see.

気迫 pretty hard to express in a single word. 烈しい is what I'm thinking of. Maybe passion?

Anyone can help gets 'nuff respect and a bottle of shochu next time they visit Kagoshima.

Kenshi
04-03-2008, 09:35 AM
grit

balls?!

ZealUK
04-03-2008, 09:42 AM
grit

balls?!

I was thinking vim or spunk.

But that's not suitable for printing on a gigantic flag.

Perhaps we should combine them "gritballs vimspunk" is sounding pretty damn macho already.

pgsmith
04-03-2008, 09:53 AM
I would opt for overwhelm myself. However, gritballs vimspunk would make a fantastic Engrish statement! :D

Kenzan
04-03-2008, 09:56 AM
I'm printing T-shirts for sale abroad as we speak.
:D

corwyn
04-03-2008, 10:04 AM
I'm printing T-shirts for sale abroad as we speak.
:D

They'd probably sell well in Japan, where bizarre, nonsensical English "phrases" sell well.

DCPan
04-03-2008, 10:14 AM
Throwing around several possibilities:

Spirit over Technique (i.e. mind over body)

Technique is Surpassable by Spirit

Conviction will trump superior technique

Spirit trumps technique


I prefer:

Technique is Surpassable by Conviction!

and so on, and so forth….

:D

Oroshi
04-03-2008, 11:35 AM
Maybe 'determination' for 気迫?

So something like "Determination outweighs technique."

ZealUK
04-03-2008, 11:43 AM
Thanks for all the replies.

It's for a commercial highschool's basketball team, so I kept it simple with "Spirit over skill". I don't think they can remember any complicated English, so that will have to do.

An english teacher I work with translated it as "strong spirits defeat skill" which made me laugh! I know that feeling!

This is a prime example of trying to translate something for a target audience, it's bloody difficlt even with short simple phrases.

The sports teacher did like the SPUNK idea. It is an all boys school, so it kind of fits :D

The great I AM
04-03-2008, 12:58 PM
IPerhaps we should combine them "gritballs vimspunk" is sounding pretty damn macho already.SPUNK BALLS!