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Hotei
31st May 2004, 11:26 AM
A low d-sharp sounds
Sensei's tsuru tightens more
Kendo's true music

mystic_kendoka
31st May 2004, 04:43 PM
i think its too short... doesnt make much sense either, try doing a renga, thats with more than one haiku stringed up together..

Kaoru
31st May 2004, 04:55 PM
Hi Mystic-san,

Haiku is 5, 7, 5 syllalbles. :) It was perfect.

Yes it makes perfect sense... if you are a musician, and I am... and I bet he is. hehe! Do you have perfect pitch Hotei-san? :)

He's talking about having to tie the tsuru tighter so it's not so loose. And, if you have perfect pitch, you can hear when it is too loose or tight, or just right. Pretty nice Haiku!

Kaoru

Niels
31st May 2004, 08:48 PM
My butt is itchy
I wonder what it could be
Hey look a squirrel

My kendo is great
I wanna be like Tom cruise
PM for details

Nothing on TV
Thats why i make a Haiku
for all you nice folk

souljah
31st May 2004, 09:39 PM
Hard hitting bully
Will not stop inflicting pain
Kick him in the nuts

Hotei
31st May 2004, 11:08 PM
My first haiku trashed
Why can't we stay on topic?
Oh well, when in Rome. . .


And yes, Kaoru-san, I am a musician, and you nailed the meaning of my poem to a "t". Thank you for being so attentive to the meaning. <gassho>

not-I
31st May 2004, 11:12 PM
i'm kind of tired
should i go to practice now?
baka! move your ass

suburi workout
right arm straight, both shoulders numb
easier this time

kirikaeshi time
men men men men men men men
kiai men zanshin

multi-waza drill
what was after kote-do?
too late, elbow hurts

kakarigeiko
impaled on a bamboo stick
is this sutemi?

keiko with sensei
accept the invitation
mirror reflection

remove armor, rei
new bruises, smell of kendo
one large cold beer please

Hotei
1st June 2004, 12:13 AM
My favorite-

Rainy afternoon
Little Daughter, you'll never
Teach that cat to dance

AlexM
1st June 2004, 07:41 AM
kendo haiku?

http://www.kendo-world.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158&highlight=haiku

Niels
1st June 2004, 08:11 AM
Sudden intense pain
What the hell did just happen
Forgot my bogu

Kaoru
1st June 2004, 09:45 AM
My first haiku trashed
Why can't we stay on topic?
Oh well, when in Rome. . .


And yes, Kaoru-san, I am a musician, and you nailed the meaning of my poem to a "t". Thank you for being so attentive to the meaning. <gassho>

Ahahaha, funny one!

I thought so. :D You're welcome!

Guys, all your Haiku is great! :D

Here's one I just made up:

Kirikaeshi...
It really is very fun!
Can we do more please?

Kaoru

Musha
1st June 2004, 06:22 PM
I don't get English Haiku :).


に 臭 太
げ い 剣
て 防 士
く 具
れ! だ

Fat kendo ka,
Smelly bougu
Get away from me :D. Only jocking :P.

Has any one heard of the fart Haiku by a famous Japanese Haiku poet?

Musha
1st June 2004, 06:28 PM
Ps has any one tried to play there Shinai? :silly: Maybe I'll make a song some time lol..

mystic_kendoka
1st June 2004, 11:26 PM
play their shinai??

Hotei
2nd June 2004, 02:53 AM
Actually, yes, and I can get 3 distinct notes out of it. It sounds like a muted guitar, but I'm a little weary of plugging it in. . .

mystic_kendoka
2nd June 2004, 03:42 AM
which notes are they? (about) and how did u get them? ill try mine too... but ill have to tighten the tsuru..

Musha
2nd June 2004, 06:56 AM
Here is a photo from a book I have. I have read a little about post war Kendo but not the rules and not in much detail.

Dou?kyougi (http://community.webshots.com/photo/118067440/148513627UjNnpo)

Musha
2nd June 2004, 07:01 AM
From what I have read Kendo stopped after the war due to sanctions from the US government to reform the country. But after introducing this new form of kendo it slowly decreased in popularity and people turned back to the kendo we have today. And by the 1970s the international kendo federation was established and the international kendo tournament to improve popularity in other countries.

not-I
2nd June 2004, 09:41 AM
:rolleyes:

musha where art thou?
or rather where art thy mind?
this is haiku thread

Musha
2nd June 2004, 05:24 PM
oops wrong thread lol!!

Musha
2nd June 2004, 05:37 PM
Can some one remove my posts:-

Yesterday 11:01 PM
Yesterday 10:56 PM

shinjinho
10th June 2004, 07:53 AM
my haiku:

La La La La La
Mi Mi Mi Mi Mi Mi Mi
La La La La La

oh yea btw i play music with my shinai too... just something to do when i'm bored. it actually keeps you company when you're trying to play a song.